Bob is a Giraffe that lives in the Amazon Rainforest, he is a happy giraffe, he loved to run.
He always touched the top of the tree and he had a happy life in the Rainforest. He likes to jump on the top of the tree because it was his hobby, but he could only jump on small trees not giant
Trees!!! He could always smell the beautiful water fall and the smell of bacon from far away!!!
All of his friends were a rhino, tigers and lion and he was the only giraffe in the amazon rainforest!!!
CLICK CLICK BANG BANG!!! When Bob the giraffe was running away from people
with guns he jumped on a tree and was stuck there.
He could feel the tree falling and saw the people with guns go back in the truck and go.
So he was happy but then he saw he was in the middle of the jungle!!!
He did not know how he made that big jump. Since he was in the middle of the jungle
he was scared because of the trees crowding him so he held on tight so he would not
Fall!!! !!!!!!but then he looked down and saw that every other animals were there talking how to
Get him down so he was so happy then a minute later he sawn what they did!!!..................
lAnd then he saw that the other animals put a bouncy cassle so he jumped off !!!then he
Went down and every other animals was happy but then he sawn that he only been on there for
5 hours but at night they all had a party so bob will cheer up!!!!
Hi Aiden
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your narrative story about the giraffe stuck up the tree. I like the way you set the scene and write about the very clear problem facing the giraffe plus the solution. What is your next goal to further improve your writing?