Friday, April 17, 2020
Code solvers by Aiden
Code solvers
Once there was a boy called jayden and he was a spy and he was spying on a boy named harry in his school and he was trying to hide stuff in his locker and when he was spy it put a code in his locker and he was good at picklock so at night he was pick-locking the front door in school but the lasers came so he had to doge them and he went to his locker and pick-locked it and then the message was
Backwards and it said under the tree in a house there you will see a code for you then he was looking at his house and he sawn one tree and he ran there and he swan a little trapdoor and he went underneath and a man then he swan the face and it was harry on the coach and he was next to the code and he quickly got it and he ran out and it said now you will be spied on and the next day he was spying and he had a suit on so nobody could see him and he was escaping school so he followed him and he was at his house stealing money and he caught him and he looked sad then the cops got him and then now nobody could go in his base and nobody could steel money anymore !!!!!!!!
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Well done Aidan I love reading a good spry story. Your writing had suspense and mystery. I wonder if you are going to write another story with a spy theme?
ReplyDeleteHi Aidan. Mrs W here. What a great imagination you have there. Lots of cool ideas. Perhaps you could have a look through and read it out loud to yourself and see where you could put in some fullstops instead of so many 'and's. I would love to see more of your writing.
ReplyDeleteHi Aiden, it's Mr Williams. What a great story. I liked the part where he had a suit that made him invisible. It reminded me of Harry Potter and his invisibility cloak. I also liked that they had to get a code. Dayzharn in Kereru has made a code that he would like people to crack, on the Kereru blog. Here is the link. I wonder if you can crack the code. https://learningkereru.blogspot.com/2020/04/the-numbered-code.html
ReplyDeleteHi Aiden,it's Michelle here
ReplyDeleteGreat story, I am so glad he was caught in the end. I quite fancy a suit that makes me invisible, I could get up to a lot of mischief. What would you do if you had one?
Michelle
I have read your story about Code Solvers again and again I liked the way you used your imagination when writing this story. For your next story maybe try and use more punctuation in particular fullstops, new paragraphs, commas etc.. If you read the story out loud to yourself you will notice when a full stop is needed or a new paragraph. You could even go back on this story and add or change sentences. Great job, and keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteMrs T